This is purely as a little hobby. I wanted to try my hand at a really simple RPG design for an online wargaming universe called Three Plains, with the support of its creator. I have chosen the Creative Commons-licensed Simple RPG System for mechanics.
Thing is, I really have no clue what I'm doing, so I wanted to ask if anyone has any feedback to help avoid the surefire clangers I am certain to drop.
My latest draft is here, I am only five pages in:
Again, I stress my only goal here is to create a very simple RPG without any massive flaws in it. Advice is welcome!
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